I was very pleased with this set of photographs. I feel that my research paid off and I improved greatly from the street photography in Assignment 2. In Assignment 2 the mistake I made was literally interpreting the brief of “crowds”.
Many of the images I shot worked well in both colour and black and white and comments from my tutor advises that I should undertake a project where the outcome would be a black and white set of shots – I will remember this for future projects.
I too like Images 5 and 6. Just after I shot image 6 the little girl ran off and I managed to capture a shot but because of her height her head was obscured by the railing bar and it was not so strong. Had I managed to get a shot with her head above the railing it would have been an even better shot.
In Image 7, which is not so strong I think if I had been a little closer to the subject it would have been stronger. This was a favourite with many of the people I consulted with.
I will endeavour to make my research more visual by including contrasting images.
Overall, I am pleased with this feedback.